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I am completely obsessed with the Æther, but now, between this set and my co-set with Phase, I am satisfied. Happy Ætherizing everyone! (I know the Æther legend enchantment is a little wierd, but I could not think of good themes for it.)

 

(Yes, I saw a picture of Jack frost and simply could not resist.)

 

So how did I do folks?

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Nice cards!  Some minor errors though, I can see you went through at least two names for Aether Mimic (his ability still says Aether Trickster)

 

You may want to say "charge counter" and not just a counter in the second effect, to avoid confusion

 

You don't really need the reminder text on "Enchant Creature"  on defiant voyager and it might be better to change the third effects text to "Enchanted creature is unblockable this turn"

 

Delayed doesn't really need the player to reveal the creature as you see the creature as it enters the battlefield... then you choose whether or not to counter it

 

And Young Aethersworn's text is bold in some places but not in others.... :D

 

 

But once again really good job!



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Æther Mimic- Fixed, thanks

 

Æther Striker- Same
 

Defiant Voyager- As of 2014, the word "unblockable" has been abolished from the magic vocabulary. for example magiccards.info is a great site because it shows to the right of the cards not what is written, but what it is translated to in modern day English. This is basically what I say when I say syntax errors. It is not really big, but I prefer to stick to it. If you are wondering why all of Theros and Born of the Gods said "can't be blocked" this is why, maybe unblockable was just so obvious, so no reminder text was needed, but would also confuse new players.  I suppose you are right that that reminder text is unneeded though.

 

Delayed // Effect- I made them reveal it because it just prevents sneaky cheating like putting the wrong card down, its just like why any specific search card makes them reveal it- to make sure its a legal target. I would have simply said "Put that creature on its owners library instead" but that would cancel all the wonderful trigger creatures I made in the set. Also, I forgot to say this but there was no option to give it fuse, so I plugged it into the unneeded P/T box.

 

Young Æthersworn- Fixed

 

Thanks for that my friend, you have a keen eye for error!

 

(Changes will be uploaded within the hour.)



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This is a very cool set I give it five stars

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No problem, I wish I could play Magic with you, you seem like a very fun opponent... sadly I only have the physical version of Magic     :)     I think it would be cool for me and you to design our own set (given that each other approves of the cards) and then battle each other with them



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Well if it is costs or safety you are worried about, don't let it!: Cockatrice

 

Right-hand side of the screen, down in downloads, you need win client, card database, and maybe tokens. All downloads are easy to use and fully safe, and best of all free! once you have it downloaded, you can make decks of any format and invite other known players to games, or just to common chat. I don't know if there's a function that would allow non-existent magic cards into a virtual play mat, but I have been looking for one!

 

And you never know, maybe, one day, our paths will cross in the real world!







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