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#1
Posted 09 April 2014 - 08:13 PM
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#2
Posted 10 April 2014 - 01:42 AM
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I usualy never critics grammar in english (because i made alot of mistake too) but this time you should realy but reaaaaly correct them for a little for example the card Fairy tail the exact effect for terampil is trample
I will not talk about the other effect but if you can correct just a little bit i will make a real review
#3
Posted 10 April 2014 - 08:14 AM
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You should really learn wording properly, but since this is your first post it is kinda ok. Look at the real MtG cards and check them meybe copy some of theirs effects as base. Also i like how you see characters but you need to have some balance in future. Here are some minor fixes: Hast=Haste, Liberty=Library, First Strick=First Strike and so on. Just check real cards and hope to see something from you soon.
#4
Posted 10 April 2014 - 05:10 PM
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Yeah, just work on MTG grammar, and also all these cards are simply to low mana cost for what they do.
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Posted 10 April 2014 - 11:10 PM
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