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[CardRelic]

Comment please

 

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[Sertar]

Its a little bit underpower since its cost 8 for a 6-4 that remove monster when it destroys it by combat that already kinda meh but you need to pay 2 life for it its not realy a fair deal and some wording isue but nothing big.

 

For the good notes nice art nice flavor and a good concept that need to be more exploited keep it up!

 

Oh and btw you should try magic set editor it let you make card with alot more of detail.

[CardRelic]

Its a little bit underpower since its cost 8 for a 6-4 that remove monster when it destroys it by combat that already kinda meh but you need to pay 2 life for it its not realy a fair deal and some wording isue but nothing big.

 

For the good notes nice art nice flavor and a good concept that need to be more exploited keep it up!

 

Oh and btw you should try magic set editor it let you make card with alot more of detail.

yeah my mistake forgot to add a few things to it and i toned downed the cost hope its not to OP now

[Sertar]

It was reach lifelink deathtouch the whol time and i missreaded or you jsut add it?

[CardRelic]

It was reach lifelink deathtouch the whol time and i missreaded or you jsut add it?

I meant to add them by somehow i didn't though im not so sure yet on reach

[Sertar]

Reach is perfect fit for its flavor but you should now increase its mana cost by 1 and it will be perfect i think but its your card you decide.

[CardRelic]

Reach is perfect fit for its flavor but you should now increase its mana cost by 1 and it will be perfect i think but its your card you decide.

One what colorless or black? Nvm i made 3 black 3 colorless

[Aztegio]

I like the idea of a life cost on upkeep but thats a flaw m8 that's suposed to make it cheaper

 

Regards Aztegio.

[chaoscal]

if you destory target creature do you get rid of its flavour text , sorry for the sarcasm but check spelling i'm sorry but spelling errors bug me if you find any on any cards I make tell me please. Like the flavour and feel of the card btw the syntax in the ability should be whenever this card destroys a creature if that creature would go to the graveyard you may exile that instead or just whenever this creature destroys another creature, exile that creature instead.

 

BTW love the flavour text and feel it is costed right now, maybe lose the additional costs since 3BBB is already a high cost and require you to be solidified in black.

[CardRelic]

if you destory target creature do you get rid of its flavour text , sorry for the sarcasm but check spelling i'm sorry but spelling errors bug me if you find any on any cards I make tell me please. Like the flavour and feel of the card btw the syntax in the ability should be whenever this card destroys a creature if that creature would go to the graveyard you may exile that instead or just whenever this creature destroys another creature, exile that creature instead.

 

BTW love the flavour text and feel it is costed right now, maybe lose the additional costs since 3BBB is already a high cost and require you to be solidified in black.

there i fixed the wording and reduced the cost to 3BB any lower and the effects outweigh the cost by to much. at leats to me 

[chaoscal]

there i fixed the wording and reduced the cost to 3BB any lower and the effects outweigh the cost by to much. at leats to me 

BTW word the effect so it has a trigger e.g at the beginning of your end step pay 2 life, if not destroy this card also the BBB felt great and adds to solidifying what is essentially the grim reape in black maybe cost it 2BBB or get rid of life loss and cost it 3BBB like before. 

[CardRelic]

BTW word the effect so it has a trigger e.g at the beginning of your end step pay 2 life, if not destroy this card also the BBB felt great and adds to solidifying what is essentially the grim reape in black maybe cost it 2BBB or get rid of life loss and cost it 3BBB like before. 

i like the life  cost and this card it just seems to fit but it can reword it and the cost