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[Daniel Thompson]

I'm working on a deck based upon this card. Tell me what you think and add in some criticism if you like.

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[Sertar]

First of all a 7-7 deathtouch double strike lifelink for 5 is waay undercosted secondo what exactly does the counter on the third effect and for finish you should make its second ability a tap one but overall if you balance it a little that would be a great concept

[Daniel Thompson]

First of all a 7-7 deathtouch double strike lifelink for 5 is waay undercosted secondo what exactly does the counter on the third effect and for finish you should make its second ability a tap one but overall if you balance it a little that would be a great concept

I made a few changes, tell me what you think.

[Sertar]

Good amelioration on the first one but for the second card omg wtf man XD i mean with a black deck killing a creature is easy as fuck and its a instant that mean turn three yo can deal 10 damage to an opponent that realy too strong. (btw eff that add to a card when a creature die can also be called morbid example: http://gatherer.wiza...iverseid=243257

[chaoscal]

what counters are they + or -   I assume its + plus card 2 is insanely overpowered i mean 10 damage thats half the starting life total two copies of that and unless the opponents playing life gain your opponent is screwed

[LordStormWinter]

Daniel, he has a point. what you have there on that second card is literally Morbid material a better way to rework that card world be to reword it as such "Target player loses 5 life. Morbid (Target player loses 10 life if and only if a creature was destroyed this turn)" and change to a sorcery speed instead of instant speed. Plus the cost is WAY TOO LOW for that card increase to at least 5 total casting cost.

[chaoscal]

I have just had a great idea after reading the cost increase comment how about you give it kicker for 1B and say if it was kicked i a creature died this turn that player loses an additional 5 life that way it stays as a BBB lava axe to the face while having additional costing if it is to be 10 damage to the face instead.