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Here is going to be where updates for my set will be shown if you haven't already check out my previous post with the first 70~ cards.

 

Update 1

 

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Update 2 

Just a cycle of cards I made

Dragons cycle

 

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i like this set your working on Chaos, beautiful cards and awesome effects. And for the Aegis Gungnir Legendary Dragon. you could make that ability a working mechanic for creatures. Think Will of the Council from Conspiracy set. I was thinking you could call it Natural Gifts (When this creature comes into play choose (Spear) or (Shield): If you chose (Spear) target creature you control gets +4/+0 and Trample; If you chose (Shield) target creature you control gains +0/+4 and Indestructible.) this way it is much more balanced and gives you the ability to target you want to have either ability. Having it target Aegis himself makes him WAY TOO OPed. Just my thoughts on the subject.

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He does cost 2 of everything if you have seen progenitus you understand 2 of everything means overpowered to hell. the way i see it he's either a 11/15 un-killable thing that cannot be improved anymore or a 15/11 that can equip things but be destroyed by colourless ( artifacts and the like). may make a sorcery that has just that ability and maybe more cards with similar abilities. his name is a compound of a mythical spear and shield which is where the options come from : Gungnir was odin's spear and aegis was a shield baring medusa's visage to different mythos but who cares its mtg



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i understand but wat do u think of my adaptation of it?


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I like the ability and think it would be good but I don't think it fits since its supposed to be a lone mysterious creature sort of thing instead of a benefactor of others more lore will come out about him as more cards are released.  



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i c. keep up the good work tho. cant wait to see more

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I like the general theme, there are a few simple spelling mistakes nothing major.

 

Aegis Gungnir Protection from Colors not Colored. (I know why you said Colored, cause that's how Emrakul is worded but that is followed by spells) :)

 

On Drikus' Breeding Chamber (there is missing a dirty joke) but that aside i feel that the Dragon type is supposed to just follow the experiment type. = Dragon Experiment token.

 

Drikus Labworker need to be somthing like: 1U, T: Copy target activated artifact ability, if it isn't a mana ability. You may choose new targets for the copy.

 

Ereck is a poor man cause he aint got no power or toughness and will die when he hit to battlefield.

 

Forest Guardian: When a creature attacks you or a planeswalker you control, if Forest Guardian has defender, it loses defender until your next end step.

 

Next to that it all looks good. :D

 

Honor of the Dragon is a Beast! :D

 

Regards Aztegio.



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will fix but forest guardian has wrath check previous post so is meant to be worded that way



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will fix but forest guardian has wrath check previous post so is meant to be worded that way

i see, you can fidle with the wording but try to keep the wording true to the way it normally flows.

 

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