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What exactly does the effect on the first one do? It sounds useful, but I'm kinda confused by your wording...

And the second one looks neat, I like the art. The art on both of these looks very MTG-like :)


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What exactly does the effect on the first one do? It sounds useful, but I'm kinda confused by your wording...

And the second one looks neat, I like the art. The art on both of these looks very MTG-like :)

I know it isn't said very well, I've already mostly remade that one as a gold card. It allows you to use a number of planes in place of the same number of forests. At least that's what the new one will do. (Can't seem to upload it though as I seem to have reached a limit)



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For the Justiciar, the wording would need to be something like, "X, T: The next X green mana you spend this turn may be spent as though it were white mana." Or maybe just, "You may spend green mana as though it were white mana." Either way, it's a very odd ability, and I would expect to only see this type of effect at rare or above. Also, you may be able to get away with having a 2WG mana cost or something like that, because the effect isn't actually that great.

 

The dwarf seems really cool, but kinda dangerous. Being able to get your coolest guy back from the dead every turn is a bit scary, so I'd probably at least bump this up to rare also. Maybe even make the body on it smaller and more fragile. Remember kids, combo pieces are very risky and tricky to design.






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