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Started by TheCrazyAsylum , Aug 22 2014 09:44 PM

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TheCrazyAsylum
Posted 22 August 2014 - 09:44 PM

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Something I think would work, basically it give target creature you control bestow.

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Posted 25 August 2014 - 07:55 PM

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could work tho i see a lot of gramtical errors and syntax errors as well.

 

1) Enchant target creature you control it gains "Soulbond" <-- Might want to consider using this instead of your current wording (Soulbond - You may choose to "attach" this creature to target creature you control to have both creatures gain "Abilities of creature with Soulbond").

 

2) For this card a minimum of 3 mana would actually work for it. (2U) seems more logical than (1U).

 

3) "Our souls are forever linked and "shale" <-- you meant "shall" remain till death's grip takes us apart". <-- this would make more sense and flows more easily than your current flavor.

 

Just giving some friendly advice to buff and polish this rather well designed card.

 

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Posted 27 August 2014 - 12:03 PM

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fixed it


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