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Hello, so I'm starting a new set that I will be working on whenever I get bummed out from working on my other set, War Of The Legions

I'd like some feedback on it the cards I post here, criticism welcome!

I may also ask you guys to help get a picture for a card that I can't seem to find a suitable one, like right now if someone could recommend a pic for Chronix that would be AWESOME

Also if you want to help with lore...that is also really appreciated, if you would also like to co-create this with me PM me and I'll post the cards you make here too

Thanks!

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LordStormWinter

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hey there Marcus. 2 things 1 if he's a dragon you need to specify that "Dragon Wizard" would work in this instance. and the 3 colorless ability is OP because there is no downside. for something like that it needs to be "3, T:" or "3, pay X life: (make X believable)".

 

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I'm in the process of nerfing him via adding another card into the set, have a look at the new one

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well, that is one way to nerf Chronix. But nerf the actual card. If someone can't get StP out and someone else gets Chronix out... see what im saying.


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Hmm yeah, I'm going to redo Chronix as a Planeswalker and nerf him a bit

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lemme soft build a PW Chronix for you.


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here's the soft build of Chronix, and don't mistake soft for wimpy, he's a toothy character. Built this PW in 15min


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great though the +1 nerfing kinda went the other way i mean 60 card decks are mostly 4 and below and add blue to the deck and he alts in the first turn hes played. so i'd add a stoper to the +1 like this cant be used in extra turns



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should be chronix, the rathalos because thats what the arts off






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