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Started by Guest_ES.Marcus_* , Apr 18 2015 07:29 PM

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Posted 18 April 2015 - 07:29 PM

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Sorry for my VERY long hiatus, I've had school and just got back into magic with my friends. I decided to make a new set centered around some of what I think is really cool lore! Please give feedback on BOTH the lore and the cards

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Aisumar was an angel whose purpose was to protect valiant lives during battle at no matter the cost. Then a demon (can't think of female names) swayed him to corruption, causing his fall from the legion, she took him into the underworld where she fed him lies to fuel his anger for all the people he was sworn to protect selflessly and this augmented him and transformed him into a demon of hate
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Also, if you'd like to flesh out the lore a bit more I'd love to hear it! Also I wouldn't mind getting some suggestions for flavor text XD

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Posted 19 April 2015 - 10:11 AM

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In all honestly forgive could cost only one white mana and it would be balanced.


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Posted 20 April 2015 - 11:09 PM

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For 3 mana Pact has a pretty strong ability. I'm not sure the damaging aspect of it is much of a deterrent, but I do like the cards so far.

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Posted 25 April 2015 - 08:21 AM

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Okay, thanks! I'll update the post with more cards and fix the current ones sometime today :D
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