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Started by TheInfernalTragedy2013 , Oct 03 2013 09:22 PM

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Posted 03 October 2013 - 09:22 PM

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Posted 04 October 2013 - 11:09 AM

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I like that :D It seems cool even though it looks like dying quickly, which balances it out :)

Keep it up ;)


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Posted 04 October 2013 - 11:37 AM

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I'm surprised; This actually looks like an useful but also realistic card. Is it necessary to make it a "Blackbane"? I guess it's the faction of her, but it's type should be more something like Vampire or Demon instead.

Just imagine some Innistrad vampire, having the types "Vampire Stromkirk".


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Kalam Mekhar
Posted 04 October 2013 - 10:38 PM

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Actually a pretty sweet one, though I think the regeneration makes it broken, not gonna lie. A deathtoucher that kills two things and never dies? The fact that it's deathtouch makes losing the counters not that big of a downside anyway. Besides, this card is really wordy, and I think losing one ability would be alright. So here's my suggestion, with correct templating:

 

4BB

Deathtouch

Tristace, Blackbane Queen can only be blocked by two or more creatures.

Whenever a creature an opponent controls dies, put a +1/+1 counter on Tristace.

4/4

 

Still a very powerful card for 6 mana and a bumped up its toughness to 4 since it no longer regenerates. Hopefully this helps! Good design overall. =)


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