My love of Warhammer 40k is matched only by my hatred of pop songs, so I thought I'd do a few cards.
Adeptus Astartes:
Dreadnought: http://imgur.com/MGSuGDX
Rhino Transport: http://imgur.com/AC24YbH
Tactical Marine: http://imgur.com/AoEEdQm
Assault Marine: http://imgur.com/1iRlwuO
Tech Marine: http://imgur.com/soKBZ7H
Imperial Guard:
Lord Castellan Creed: http://imgur.com/WMGADhU
Commissar: http://imgur.com/UQeBHHk
Imperial Guardsman: http://imgur.com/XVmasCT
Imperial Mortar Team: http://imgur.com/ybnskwf
Leman Russ Battle Tank: http://imgur.com/PQnXAhe
Hydra Mobile Flak Battery: http://imgur.com/lpPKObg
Adeptus Mechanicus:
Kelbor-Hal, Fabricator-General of Mars: http://imgur.com/EphOr65
Techpriest Engineseer: http://imgur.com/1HZNCU9
Litanies of the Mechanicus: http://imgur.com/xSR9niq
Weapon Servitor: http://imgur.com/9g3Senf
Emperor-class Titan: http://imgur.com/k45uA1S
Orkz:
Warboss: http://imgur.com/Nlb9pDX
Ork Boy: http://imgur.com/yNrE2qX
Gretchen Scrappa: http://imgur.com/ZiN0hGq
Misc:
Enthroned Emperor: http://imgur.com/sO7QvPw
The God-Emperor of Mankind: http://imgur.com/ZBtyvWJ
The Black Library: http://imgur.com/aI3gXeD
Energy Node: http://imgur.com/jP6b1JZ
Resource Node: http://imgur.com/NvOzzSz
Exterminatus: http://imgur.com/FhYQPb4
STC Fragment: http://imgur.com/wC8KmdA
Daemonology, Vol. 1: http://imgur.com/J7gxV7x
The Emperor protects!
For teh Emprah
#1
Posted 12 November 2013 - 11:55 AM
#2
Posted 12 November 2013 - 12:14 PM
Why do not you post those pictures directly into the forums instead of posting links? Just use this picture icon in the tool bar.
Not bad cards BTW, I will look farther into them later.
"War is deception, a game best played... from the Shadows."
#3
Guest_SupremeKrenko_*
Posted 12 November 2013 - 12:35 PM
First of all, almost no Space Marine Order is pure white. Some can be interpreted to be white in combination; Only the Grey Knights fit pure white.
Space Marines are fvcking aggressive mutant supersoldiers, totally red, in my opinion.
The only actual problem I have with these cards, is their lack of gameplay innovation; They feel very simplified, almost a bit boring.
How about changing the Techpriest (btw when adjusted within the MtG universe, the Adeptus Mechanicus is totally black)
into "{2}, pay two life: Regenerate target artifact you control.".
Also, depending on the rank of the Techpriest, you should consider making one that can spam Servitor-tokens (Which would be colorless Human Artifactcreaturetokens, by the way; Tokens have no names).
The Tactical Marine does not do his name justice. 3/3's for {2} are STRONG, just lately they dared to print the first of this kind without any drawback or special condition.
How about making the Tactical Marine a 2/2, but giving him an ability like
{r}{2}: Choose one: First Strike, Haste, Trample, or +2/+0. Use this ability only once per turn.
Something like this would really give it the flavor of a disciplined adaptable combat unit.
#4
Posted 13 November 2013 - 11:33 AM
You started a Warhammer lore discussion in the wrong neighborhood, motherchucker Kidding, and yeah I know the Imperium of Man isn't exactly a lawful/good faction.
As for the Adeptus Mechanicus, they aren't black... on the contrary, they're into order and structure. A Chaos Heretek maybe, but not a Techpriest of the blessed Mechanicus. The Servitor token idea sounds great... but I'm having a hard time deciding on Gun Servitors, Servo-Skulls, or just repairing stuffs.
As for the Tactical Marine, excellent idea! That ability gives him a feel of adaptability I like. Damn, SupremeKrenko... you're good.
#5
Posted 18 November 2013 - 04:34 PM
Stuff happened!
Updates:
*Added new awesome ability to Tactical Marine (tip of the hat to SupremeKrenko)
*Added a Skull Servitor spammity-spam ability to the Techpriest Engineseer
*Changed Dreadnought ability from pay {1} to {t}
New Cards:
*Added Rhino Transport
*Added Assault Marine
*Added Tech Marine
*Added Lord Castellan Creed
*Added Commissar
*Added Imperial Guardsman
*Added Exterminatus
#6
Posted 21 November 2013 - 10:45 AM
New thingies!
Updates:
*Added Imperial Mortar Team
*Added Leman Russ Battle Tank
*Added Hydra Mobile Flak Battery
*Added Litanies of the Mechanicus
*Added Weapon Servitor
*Added STC Fragment
*Added Kelbor-Hal, Fabricator-General of Mars
*Added Emperor-class Titan
*Added Warboss
*Added Ork Boy
*Added Gretchen Scrappa
*Added Enthroned Emperor of Terra
*Added God-Emperor of Mankind
*Added The Black Library
*Added Energy Node
*Added Resource Node
*Added Daemonology, Vol. 1
Weapon Servitor is probably underpriced, but I'm not sure. This set is approaching playability, so any and all input is welcome before I start wasting ink. Thanks!
#7
Posted 26 December 2013 - 04:05 PM
Bump. Been away for awhile so I haven't been able to make changes, but any and all feedback is appreciated. I've begun printing at my friends' request (to my dismay), but I'm hoping someone will continue criticizing my cards before I print them all.
Cheers!
#8
Guest_SupremeKrenko_*
Posted 26 December 2013 - 06:03 PM
Cou'dent believ wen I saw hah good you wryte cardz of ze BOYZ!
Bud thairz sum deep CHAINGE you 'ave to do chainge sum stuff 'round here:
Wuat iz'an orcish Waaaghboss haz AT LEAZT three of the A's in it's Waaagh, althouw moa don' hurt nevur.
Maybe datz wuy zis paticula' boss sux at his job so much; Wuat iz a REAL Waaaghboss dusn't need foua dudez, NO!
wuat iz a REAL Waaaghboss pushes his boyz no matter hou manny dere are!
And A dunno 'ere you git gotta Ork Boy, butt DAT is not ORC enough.
Orc iz TENACIOUS, Orc iz STRONK, butt moz' of all, da Orcz'a full'o FERVOR!
Only da Boyz with 2/2 and 'aste are REAL badass BOYZ.
I hate zem Scrappaz! 'em are everywhere, looting ze stuff WE could loot better, dey zuck at it!
But you gave'em unfair pictchure in ya cardz; Di'z too weak!
Bedda change it into
"{t}: Eckzile target artifact from a gravuyard, puttan uncolahrd 0/1 construct-creachatoken with defennur onnit Waaaghfield for you.
It has [whatevur you git wonn'it to have]"
Datchu way MtG woarks; You KNOW dat iz'an sparkly thing, but oanly ze token depicts dat.
Keep'up da work, so we can start a WAAAGH! on the kitchen table, all good an' propah!
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#9
Posted 27 December 2013 - 08:44 PM
Cou'dent believ wen I saw hah good you wryte cardz of ze BOYZ!
Bud thairz sum deep CHAINGE you 'ave to do chainge sum stuff 'round here:
Wuat iz'an orcish Waaaghboss haz AT LEAZT three of the A's in it's Waaagh, althouw moa don' hurt nevur.
Maybe datz wuy zis paticula' boss sux at his job so much; Wuat iz a REAL Waaaghboss dusn't need foua dudez, NO!
wuat iz a REAL Waaaghboss pushes his boyz no matter hou manny dere are!
And A dunno 'ere you git gotta Ork Boy, butt DAT is not ORC enough.
Orc iz TENACIOUS, Orc iz STRONK, butt moz' of all, da Orcz'a full'o FERVOR!
Only da Boyz with 2/2 and 'aste are REAL badass BOYZ.
I hate zem Scrappaz! 'em are everywhere, looting ze stuff WE could loot better, dey zuck at it!
But you gave'em unfair pictchure in ya cardz; Di'z too weak!
Bedda change it into
"{t}: Eckzile target artifact from a gravuyard, puttan uncolahrd 0/1 construct-creachatoken with defennur onnit Waaaghfield for you.
It has [whatevur you git wonn'it to have]"
Datchu way MtG woarks; You KNOW dat iz'an sparkly thing, but oanly ze token depicts dat.
Keep'up da work, so we can start a WAAAGH! on the kitchen table, all good an' propah!
Dear SupremeKreno;
You have provided a challenge to my English skills and, like a knight facing a dragon, I had no choice but to plunge into your comment for the glory of king and dictionary. I liked your idea for the Scrappa. Gonna change it soon. I also noticed that the Ork Boyz were a little on the weak side.
Wait, WAAAGH! has thre A's? Curious, I shall have to make note of this.
I shall endeavor to create a WAAAGH! capable of living up to your lofty ideals of a kitchen war.
Tanks agin fer all da feadback, ya punny git.
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