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I've been tinkering with the idea for a White/Black deck, and something like this makes me feel giddy.

 

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I like it, but I'm not sure if it'd get a bunch of use. It's in no way a bad card, I'm just not sure people would go to it.

 

The only thing I kinda have a problem with is the image, and that doesn't mean much to me, so good job. 6/10, a little above average.



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Yeah, thanks ^^

 

I don't know much about Magic, and the image was hard to find for the concept I wanted, so I picked the closest image I could find.  I wish I could find something that stood out more.



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It's fine, you're a beginner. If you didn't make mistakes, you'd never learn.

 

And trust me, I've had trouble with card images before as well. There's been multiple occasions where I spend over a week looking for my card's image. In fact, I'd say, just as a tip from making custom Yu-Gi-Oh cards, make sure you get your image last. Come up with the card concept, the name, flavor, everything. Then you go for the image.



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This card doesn't really have any sense, in accordance to the colour pie. Black and White aren't the colours of mana fixing, nor mana acceleration (black does, nowadays, only through "swamps-matter" cards).

 

Also flavourfully I think it should be an Angel Demon but that's neither here nor there.



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I think that this card would look nicer if the image showed a battle or something between good and evil. I think that would make the card alot more majic like.^^



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This card is... really weird. And doesn't really fit the color pie. White and black don't fix, and white definitely does not accelerate, and black doesn't accelerate in this way. Also it's an Angel that doesn't have flying.



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This card is... really weird. And doesn't really fit the color pie. White and black don't fix, and white definitely does not accelerate, and black doesn't accelerate in this way. Also it's an Angel that doesn't have flying.

 

With only 1 wing, I don't think it'll be flying too well.



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Have to agree with a few of the replies so far in that this card is cool in a vacuum, but is most definitely NOT a black/white card. Pay B and tap for BB would possibly work or something along those lines, but black virtually never gets mana from other colors. And white just doesn't mana ramp unless you're searching for the occasional Plains.






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