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Started by Overlord Barty , Feb 03 2013 11:57 AM

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Overlord Barty
Posted 03 February 2013 - 11:57 AM

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Worried if it's undercosted if anything. But then I don't know anything about how Magic cards should be designed.

 

So yeah... fixes?


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Rodrigo
Posted 03 February 2013 - 12:01 PM

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Nope, not undercosted. This is an amazing card for limited formats, wow.


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Posted 03 February 2013 - 12:08 PM

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Yeah, I agree with Rod, but I have some criticisms.

 

First being that the image got squished, but it doesn't mean much.

 

The second and lat being the flavor. It needs a space between it and the effect. Plus, it needs to read: "The quiet ones are always those you should be most wary of." - Captain Hanz etc.

 

Besides that, I think it'd be played moderately. 7/10.


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Kalam Mekhar
Posted 27 February 2013 - 07:51 PM

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The first ability should read, "2G: Until end of turn, ~ becomes a 4/4 [green, I'm assuming] Bear creature with trample."

 

Also, I'm not sure you really need two different colors for a regeneration effect when it's not clear at all what black has to do with anything. At least from looking at this one card, anyway. All in all though, pretty decent design.


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Posted 02 March 2013 - 06:57 PM

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thought it was kinda weird to have black in the regenerate cost. 

especially with no other creature types. green humans dont usually need black mana. 


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Posted 12 March 2013 - 04:54 AM

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That looks good. This post may be unneeded, but I don't see anything to complain about that hasn't been complained about already.


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