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Started by leon_99 , May 08 2017 04:51 AM
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leon_99
Posted 08 May 2017 - 04:51 AM

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hello this is from my first set, i hope you all like it ,got the idea from D&D ,may post the other dragons including the land cards that go with them so enjoy and battle on.

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Posted 08 May 2017 - 05:07 PM

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I like it, please post more! However, a few notes:

*Please, please, please capitalize your words that need capitalized.
*Arthes's first ability should read "During your upkeep, you may tap Arthes, the Primal Flame. If you do, put a SOMETHING counter on Arthes.
*The second ability should read "{t}: Arthes deals 3X damage to target opponent, where X is the number of SOMETHING counters on Arthes." I'd probably remove the counters for balancing reasons.
*Flavor text should be [italicized].

*It's pretty balanced, and honestly could probably be a non-Mythic rare. Beyond a few grammar mistakes (like dropping commas), this is very reminiscent of what could be an actual card. Keep it up!


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