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[Krieg of Keld]

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Please give lots of feedback

 

Edit: Thanks to Slayer-72 and Yugiman64 for their advice, I think this version should be more balanced.

[Krieg of Keld]

first ability is a removal, and the second one not only lets him have a target, but also gives you a 4/4 haste? I wouldnt even use his final ability. 

mabey instead of a destroy, make his first ability a burner. ~ deals X damage to target creature, where X is equal to the number of loyalty counter on ~.

 

not sure if a black red should have a creature production either. so far, I think, Garruk is the only planeswalker to do that with large creatures. Im not sure where these black dogs are coming from either and I've watched the anime. perhaps just loose the Haste, and/or make them 2/2 zombies

 

also, for his final needs to cost more and he needs color specification. he's becoming a different card so it does not just assume it's the same colors as the planes walker. oh, and by the way,.... Go for the throat. 

 

I like the idea of the burn instead of destroy, I think that works better than destroying. The dog comes from OVA 2 and 9, when he uses them to attack luke and fight walter. One thing that occurred to me just now is to make the dog legendary because it actually has a name and all that jazz. As for the final, the main reason I didn't put color specification is because the card maker I was using has a 130 character limit. Thanks for the feedback!