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TylerConnolly

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This set is actually for a game mode I'm working on that would be similar to a castle siege, I'll update later with details. Balancing tips and suggestions always welcome, but without further adou: The Paragons Cometh.

(Okay, some further adou, It's a busy week so I will update this set as I continue to create them.)

Red:

 

Paragon:

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

Daeluin is a 2/3 with "X {r}{r}{r}" summon cost, in addition his X summoning can not exceed four. (4)

 

Creatures:

http://www.mtgcardma...name=Red common

 

http://www.mtgcardma...name=Red common

 

Instants and Sorceries:

http://www.mtgcardma...name=Red common

 

White:

 

Paragon:

http://www.mtgcardma...uary - Planeswa

 

The mana cost of Tybalt's second ability has been reduced to three, in addition half of the converted mana (rounded up) of the creature spell must be paid with the exception of an angel creature which only requires the three mana, granted it's power is less than or equal to four, otherwise it follows all criteria.

 

Creatures:

http://www.mtgcardma...me=White common

 

Black:

 

Paragon:

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

Artifacts:

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

Blue:

 

Paragon:

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

Green:

 

Paragon:

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

The vine tokens can not attack players, a stipulation will be added next round of edits.


Edited by TylerConnolly, 10 March 2014 - 09:59 PM.

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The main problem here is your magic vocabulary. For example, the red sorcery should look more like this

(multikicker is an already existing ability that is used for things like this.) Now, notice the () rules text after the word multikicker. to achieve this explanatory rules text- or flavor text, simply put in brackets>[Insert desired words here].

 

There are also a few overpowered themes such as Avacyn Angel's ability, but it is mostly just flaws in oracles rules text.


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TylerConnolly

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What if I were to add a draw back to Tybalt's 4, something along the lines of "After this effect resolves you take damage equal to half the additional power"? or " {2} Pay a creatures converted mana cost. Add that creatures attack to Tybalt, Strength of Avacyn for this turn only. If Tybalt, Strength of Avacyn did not attack this turn then you take damage equal to the increase in power."
 

The White and Black Knights are the themes for the black and white cards of this set. In this block White will be featured in the prominent role of "the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few totalitarian faction" where Black will be cast as "the power of free will and the importance of the individual". Green will fall in the middle with a lean towards White and an opposition to Red, which will be featured as a middle ground with a lean towards Black. Blue will play a neutral area between the two preaching neutrality and self determination.

 

New cards for tonight are as follows sorted by color.

 

White:

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

(The White and Black Knights are the themes for the black and white cards of this set.)

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

Black:

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

Blue:

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

Green:

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=

 

Red:

http://www.mtgcardma...e future is now

 

http://www.mtgcardma...&set2=&setname=







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