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[Phase]

I might create a set about the Ravone, wizards and their hounds who want to stir trouble without being affected themselves.  Here is a preview of two of the cards:
1. Ravone Pain Doctor

2. Ravone Stalker

Hope you like em!

 

[Lolilord]

Btw, you can edit your titles, it just may cause confusion, that's wut great here, you'll never do anything that you can't reverse. (except your reputation.)

 

Ravone Stalker is totally Gruul, or just mono red, but definitely not black

 

Ravone Pain Doctor is a little red, that is the color of redirection (Blue is the color of control direction of SPELLS) and also,  he could be incredibly powerfull, but he is 4 for a 0/5 mythic so that part is ok.

 

I do like the theme though, and when I hear "Ravone" for some reason witch doctors come to mind, which would work well with summoning hounds.

[Phase]

Ok, changes:

Ravone Stalker

Thank you Lolilord

[Torterrapizza2002]

Hey.

 

You made a new Ravone Stalker here, but you haven't put it on the doc.

[Phase]

No, I changed it for the doc.  If anyone doesn't know wats going on, me and Torterra here are real life friends and working on this set together.

[Phase]

New cards:

 

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[Phase]

I want some feedback on these new cards.

[Lolilord]

I would change desecrate to: "You may pay 3 life to search your library for a card and put it in your hand, if you do, shuffle your library and skip your next draw step," This will make the gameplay much more fluent and less wordy.

 

Cure to Agony is simply to powerful and incredibly broken.

 

Ravone Altar: Because of the ability cost, the black MC is needless, just make it a normal artifact with a colorless cost, also consider making it cost a bit more, because this effect is stronger than you think, and not just because your set rellies off it.

 

Ravone Himself: There are evil combos, but not easily gotten out and not in this set very much. I would give him a way that makes it so when he gets rid of his counters he puts some of them on opponent creatures.

 

Everything else is decent, with a few wierd turns in syntax.

 

Not bad, it's theme is definitely coming along

[Phase]

Hmm, I will have to change the wording of the cards.  Alright.

[Čuněsej Kvičevič Prasov]

I really like this idea but there is one thing to new Ravon Stalker: when it attacks, there are no blocking creatures. You have to change it to something like "Whenewer Ravon Stalker deals combat damage to a player put -1/-1 counter on all creatures that blocked this turn." or something like that.

[Lolilord]

Or "Whenever a creature blocks a creature you control while Ravone Stalker is attacking, put a -1/-1 counter on that creature." would work as well to make it more of an instant damage/sustain reducer.