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Posted 22 April 2014 - 05:51 AM
Vigilance does neither fit the Demon-Type, nor the Colors. Also Blackbane is no valid creature type (Is it a faction or something like that?).
The casting cost is not only to low, but casting costs that only consist of flat symbols without colorless mana end up unauthentic.
You don't need to write "I do not own the Artwork"; Just leave it empty.
Posted 13 May 2014 - 07:45 AM
Exmortis new card subtypes are created all the time, and yes it is a faction, therefore that statement is invalid. Vigilance can exist in black and red cards, therefore that statement is also invalid, and also there are plenty of solid colored creatures so not only are your statements untrue they are biased and moronic.
Btw the part that says I do not own the artwork is a disclaimer, in respect to the original artist.
Posted 13 May 2014 - 02:44 PM
Woah there, Captain! Stop punching yourself (and me, for that matter) with the toxic broom of anger! This tirade of yours filled with "InvalidInvalidInvalidBiasedMoronic" is not only very harsh, but also just full of factual errors.
First of all: What the hell man?! Calm down. Seriously, I'm happy that this forum rarely has members reacting as aggressive as yourself.
Also: "Biased"? For real? English is not my first language, but does this word even remotely fit here? My criticism on your card was not biased, or even meant to be offensive; I just listed some general mistakes you made in the design process of your card; It lacks flavor, it just breaks with the syntax of MtG (Which is a BAD thing, cards are not necessarily more "creative", just because they are featuring odd design choices), and most importantly:
It is basically the same Legendary Demon we've always seen, above average/high manacost, black or red aligned, some kind of drawback for which you usually don't care, because that demon is super strong; It is nothing new, not even in the slightest regard.
Let's look at the details:
New cardtypes are not added all the time, except for new races etc (but that's rare). Anyway, you might add as many number of custom creaturetypes as you desire (obviously), yet, anyone looking at your cards can decide whether he likes your addition to the game; Putting the card's faction in the types, is a genuine bad idea. You don't have the types Orzhov, Akraoan, or Jund etc.
Only because there are red and/or black cards with vigilance, it doesn't become a viable mechanic for the colors. There is NO FLAVOR AT ALL in the connection of Grimrot and Vigilance, nothing in its mechanics (or even its artwork) that makes Vigilance in anyway stand out as a remarkable trait of this character.
So. I calmed down (don't know about you, maybe you will soon honor me with a furious answer, calling out all of MY mistakes; I'm looking forward to it).
Maybe I'll go and play some Don't Starve now. You know this game? it's bananas!
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