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  • Locationon top of Emrakul, dressed in the skin of a Phyrexian obliterator I killed myself.

This is my first card I've made with the card maker that isn't based off a TV show or videogame. Please give lots of feedback and advice :).

 
 
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I feel like saying that it's too strong, but I'm not entirely sure. It's definitely a boss hoss supreme and I like it. But field wiping all flyers... =/ I'm not sure.


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pure white akroma. making it an 8 drop would be my only nit-pick.

 

other than that, perfect card.  literally sounds like something WotC would punch out. 


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I feel like saying that it's too strong, but I'm not entirely sure. It's definitely a boss hoss supreme and I like it. But field wiping all flyers... =/ I'm not sure.

I was thinking of making it wipe ALL flyers at first, but that seemed like to much of a drawback with the kind of deck that this would be played in.

 

pure white akroma. making it an 8 drop would be my only nit-pick.

 

other than that, perfect card.  literally sounds like something WotC would punch out. 

I actually entirely agree with you on it being an 8 drop, either that or bump it's p/t down to 6 each.


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:o

I love the art on this card, where did you get it?

And yeah, it lookslike it would bean 8 dropcard, other than that, looks good. Especially for an angel deck, and I love angels :)


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I love the art on this card, where did you get it?

And yeah, it lookslike it would bean 8 dropcard, other than that, looks good. Especially for an angel deck, and I love angels :)

The art is listed on the card itself, but here's a link to his website http://www.kekaiart.com/  :).


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Neat site! For future reference, I'm always a sucker for angels lol, my angel deck is my weakest but I love it so much ^^


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I think that the card is a very nice idea but there is a problem white is'nt realy ant fly thats green and in addition white exiles more than destroyes

so i would say "exile all flying creatures youre opponents control if Divulus, sky separim leavses the battel field return cards exiled by Divulus, sky separim to the battel field"



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^^ 

Sunblast Angel and Wrath of God says differently. 

as for the anti fly, i guess, but i would attribute these abilities to one of the following choices:

A. personality of Legendary creature

B. 7 or 8 drop

C. outside the box cards(whole point of making your own cards)

D. shits and giggles.

 

pick one.



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Yeah, Destroying creatures with flying is not a white thing.

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I would recommend not attaching cards and instead uploading them to photobucket and posting them that way. The card is awkward design and most likely wouldn't run well in a white deck.






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