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Blor and Jester of madness are definite Black cards Blor is potentially black-red but his ability isn't mono-red, prophet of fall needs an activation trigger for her ability also such as "when this creature enters the battlefield" or "when Profit of fall dies," , From Nightmare to reality is heinously under costed and has no drawbacks similarly with curious pupil although even worse. The cards have had a lot of thought put into them but not a lot of balancing in terms of power versus cost and colour. Your other five cards seem good and are well balanced. However you should consider making bounty of the nether you may not you must. Love they grow inside typical black madness type token effect that ruins an opponents life before making tokens overall well done great set of cards.



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This card is quite good but also quite strange,as a blue spell it seems quite odd as blue is normally about knowing what your getting rid of beforehand and not top deck exiling. It also seems to be costed oddly here is y take on a more blue fitting cardwhich changes the ability slightly to match blues forethought over randomness, fee free to disagree. Alternatively the card could be made black with slight costing changes anyway here's my bluer version of the card.

 

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great changes balances has been restored and these cards are now great. you know flash doesn't have a full stop after it



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My favorite cards are "From Nightmare to Reality" and "They Grow Inside" for sure :)



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Theres alot of good ways to use all this card control, some might argue price og mana cost but i for one just like many of the ideas, love to see more you can tjek out some of my idea's if you like tell me what you think.

 

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