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Started by Bad-People , Apr 22 2013 07:05 PM
red giant elemental creature intimidate

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Posted 22 April 2013 - 07:05 PM

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For my first card I thought I'd try something simple but powerful.

 

Fireheart Forge Giant

 

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Intimidate

 

A living stature imbued with the will of its creator.


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Posted 22 April 2013 - 07:44 PM

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I'd make it uncommon. I'm not really sure though.


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Posted 22 April 2013 - 09:23 PM

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  • Locationon top of Emrakul, dressed in the skin of a Phyrexian obliterator I killed myself.

Yeah, make it an uncommon. Also, you can make flavor text by putting the text in square brackets.


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Posted 22 April 2013 - 09:46 PM

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Revised 

 

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Posted 22 April 2013 - 10:59 PM

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Yeah, make it an uncommon. Also, you can make flavor text by putting the text in square brackets.

haha! Thanks man. That actually helps me out a lot too.

 

As for the card, I'd say it's spot on. =) Nice and balanced, just like the dev team would make.


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Posted 23 April 2013 - 04:02 PM

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Nice card, Intimidate is an uncommon keyword for huge monsters (Of course there are huge exceptions,but I don't have any ;_;)

I would collect this if it was out :)


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Sasuke Vs. Deidara:

"I saw through your Genjutsu!"

"But there's another one..."

"I saw through that too!"

"But there's another one..."

"****."

 

Click Me! I don't do anything!

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Posted 24 April 2013 - 07:11 PM

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I have personal feeling for this card. Red elementals are my stuff, I'm going to drop this turn 4. 

honestly could be a rare. ----> http://gatherer.wiza...tiverseid=87900

 

making this an elemental make it silly, but i love it none the less.


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Posted 24 April 2013 - 09:20 PM

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Ahh, I didn't notice that it's technically not an elemental...

I'd change sub-type from Giant elemental to Giant Construct, since it's made of metal.

Other than that, still good. And I like "Excruciator" too, ty for the link slayer :)


Sasuke Vs. Deidara:

"I saw through your Genjutsu!"

"But there's another one..."

"I saw through that too!"

"But there's another one..."

"****."

 

Click Me! I don't do anything!

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Posted 24 April 2013 - 09:26 PM

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Ahh, I didn't notice that it's technically not an elemental...

I'd change sub-type from Giant elemental to Giant Construct, since it's made of metal.

Other than that, still good. And I like "Excruciator" too, ty for the link slayer :)

The metal's only the outer shell, more like armor. The real life-force is in the fire inside. 


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Posted 25 April 2013 - 04:35 PM

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Ahh k... I suppose that makes sense...


Sasuke Vs. Deidara:

"I saw through your Genjutsu!"

"But there's another one..."

"I saw through that too!"

"But there's another one..."

"****."

 

Click Me! I don't do anything!

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Posted 25 April 2013 - 04:41 PM

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I'm sorry, i should have clarified, I meant silly, as in extraordinarily powerful. 

 

smoke braided http://gatherer.wiza...iverseid=205398

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Soulbright Flamekin http://gatherer.wiza...iverseid=189218

 

turns this card into a turn 4 power play

I would love to have a card like this for my elementals <3. 


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Posted 25 April 2013 - 04:52 PM

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Ahh k... I suppose that makes sense...

Frankly Construct would probably still apply anyway, I just don't want to put more than two sub-types on it.


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Posted 25 April 2013 - 05:10 PM

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construct is usually used for artifacts, anyway.


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