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[ginirokitsune]

hello all today i have an unlikely story of three walkers lest start with the back story.

 

born in a village called Fera and lost on a river because of a raid Blare was found by priestess Arela more named queen of the Great City, palace city, wife of Erendel lord bishop. raised as a priestess blare was taught to protect the city as best she could.

now grown, the city was raided and blares life threatened, she walked for the first time. after some days she walked back to her plane but found herself in Fera. after the elder and her birth mother saw her they welcomed her unusual visit as gift from the ancient one.

they offer that she stay awhile and blare reluctantly agrees months go by and she learns the ways of her people and then parts way to return to palace city. upon her return the city rejoices, the bishop and priestess welcome her home and gives her her place back.

after haven seen her birth home she refuses and asks to be made a soldier. after a great argument the bishop makes her a captain and not long after she proves her self with the lessons she learned from her village and gains the name Blare of the Golden Cross

 

Sareth finding himself in Trusken needs to survive resorts to the only thing he knows, assassination, seeks work and finds it with the Gravebearers. a group known to target people of power and convert them by any means. one day on a job he finds himself the target of one of blares hunts. on the verge of capture he claims his target then blare busts into the room through the only way in or out. not wanting to be captured he uses the only method he has left, he walks.

 

meanwhile on a secluded mountain is the dragon bearer temple. in this temple resides monks whom study the dragons breath script in order to use it as a peaceful way to end conflict. in this group is one such monk named Kross, this day in his meditation he unknowingly walks to a plane at war with itself and to his fear both sides using dragons breath. using meditation he returns and while believing this a premonition he denounces his monk-hood and begins to wander Trusken.

after some time he finds himself going against sareth and the battle travels to palace city.

this battle has caught the eye of blare whom intervenes and forces them to work under her as palace guards kross agrees but sareth in essence denies then runs. blare chases sareth into a corner so again sareth decides to walk but this time right in the middle of the walk blare grabs sareth and drags him back into the plane. completely dumfounded sareth tries again and again blare drags him back. he then questions her as too how she can do this and she simply answers i dont know what you speak of all i know is your not getting away again.

clearly she remembers last time so he reluctantly agrees even if only to learn how she could drag him from the middle of a walk.

 

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[Sertar]

For the first and last one the problem is their second ability that are completly to a little bit out of color green and white can destroy artifact or enchantement but creature and planeswalker are not realy what they does and for the black one it seem more red than black but this one is minor.

[ginirokitsune]

fera is a village buried in the woods so their method of living involves hunting big game and its in a set not well tuned for multicolor still need to work them in then may find a fix

[Sertar]

Even then i can explain it by Garruk, Garruk is the biggest hunter but for him to destroy creature or planeswalker he needed black mana in his mana cost.

[ginirokitsune]

i altered the plan to make factions muticolor though can i get an idea for w/r palace and g/b woods to work together and not w/b because thats the colors for gravebearers

maby this do good?