So had an idea. Thought I needed to put it into cards. First three cards of the 60 total mini set.
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You should really think about a more elegant design for your set. Up to this point, all I can see is a mess of First Strike, Death Touch, and Flying, in combination with some creaturefetch. This alone makes no valid flavorful set.
Especially the annihilator 1 is just confusing and uncalled for. Speaking of Lilith, cards that referr to possible parts of another cards name are usually a no-go in MtG Syntax. The fun of MtG sets are the possibilities to combine them with each other, while maintaining their flavor. As it is now, Lilith would synergize with cards like "Tel-Jillad Fallen", that have NOTHING to do with it flavorwise. Instead of referring to another cards name, a card like this would usually check for its type, like for example "if you control another angel and/or demon creature".
Also, Commander of the Fallen lacks an explicit name to be a legendary creature.
Anyway, how is this anything near unglued?
I see your point, and I agree with you; I was not thinking at the moment when I typed up Lilith. And while I want to consider it a set, it's rather unglued because it's mythology and folklore like Lucifer and Lilith and, eventually, the Creator himself.
Also, I believe I've seen some legendary creatures with vague names like Commander of the Fallen. But I could be wrong.
I'll consider your advice as it's a good idea. I was just making cards at the moment but now I might make them into a bit of an unglued set.
And I was trying to face the deck around a "Whenever it deals damage to a player, (Effect)" kind of feel for Morning Star side, whereas "Heaven" would be "Whenever you gain life" and such. Trying to think of more to put in.
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