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Here are a few cards I've designed, hope you like them all. Feel free to comment.

 

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Other Spells

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New Versions (Not editing Yi Tian since that effect is broken enough to warrent the loops you have to jump through to get it)

 

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1. Ara

Muahaha a "Rakdos Rite Knife" target! Yet for the mana cost i say make him kill players to, he is 3 life and thats great casue that is his weakness and thats fair.

 

2. Jusk

Jusk effective at making the opponent not attack you yet not somthing you can remove. Yet i feel you need to make him Shroud not Hexproof to prevent people using "Pariah" on him.

 

3. Llakir

Good Control dragon i still say for the mana make the last one simple, Whenever a non land permanent you don't control becomes tapped gain 1 life. and not only due to effects you control.

 

4. Melopia

Yep she is wonderfull but i go as far as saying make the counters permanent. or she will get hammered.

 

5. Yi Tian

A Trample land snatcher, i like him think you can use the battalion effect to save some text ;)

 

6. Ara's Embers.

Instant speed! please make it instant speed its soo bad in sorc. Q.Q

And one more thing ither cut the card discard to 1 or make it as faithless to make it really cool. Draw 2 cards Discard 2 at random and then shot for 5. that really fit it :D

 

7. Councuring force

To that mana cost i change it to a enchantment saying: that when it comes into play each creature gains the effect to steal a land on combat damage to players, and then make make it so you keep the lands as long as the enchantment remain. ;D

 

8. Domination Pressence

Yep Control wonder cards, it works :)

 

9. Forest Chorus

Make it 3 mana or even 2 i belive "Parallel Lives" do this just as a permanent enchantment. so this as a bulder card needs to be cheaper, ad worst it makes 2 1/1 at best 1 other token maby a charm knight 2 2/2 then but cost 2 cards. feel the cut in mana is needed.

 

10. Hollow Phatasem.

I say make it like a grave threat so that the card is like mill 3-5 cards and then it recasts for each card named Hollow Phatasem in your grave.

 

But all in all Good cards 8/10

 

Regards Aztegio.



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Here this was how i was thinking about wording it. With the inspiration from your Hollow Phatasem.

 

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Okay I've editted them.



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Me like :D



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I'm glad you like them :) And thanks for the critique, a couple of the things you said such as forest chorus costing three were things I debated on but didn't do, but if other people agree on doing it then why argue.



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haha Sure thing it's just inputs not commandments good you found some of them usefull.



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Something is missing from Jusk. Where do I put the top X cards of my library? I know it's implied, it's just not explicitly said.

 

"Shroud

Whenever ~ is dealt damage, each player puts that many cards from the top of their library into their graveyard.

~ may block any number of creatures."

 

The same goes for Hollow Phantasm.

 

"When you cast ~, copy it for each card in your graveyard named ~. You may choose new targets for the copies.

Target player puts the top X cards of their library into their graveyard, where X is the amount of combat damage they have been dealt this turn, plus three."






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