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[DragonWolf]

Ha! Slithereens, nice. In regard to the creature types, MtG cards aren't usually typed after their names.

Also, several of the creatures seem lopsided. Several of the commons, like Rising Ice Recruit, are way too powerful for that rarity. A 3/2 with double strike for only 3 mana should be an uncommon at VERY least, seems more rare material to me. There are a lot of commons like that, who have a combination of sturdy stats, good abilities, and low costs that are a bit too powerful on their own. I'd suggest increasing the costs on these, or maybe lowering their power and toughness.

On the other hand, something like Silverwood Titan isn't nearly as powerful as some actual Rares. It's strong, but it has a rather weak effect, seems like it would be uncommon instead. Sandclaw Marauder is perfect placement for its rarity.

Lastly is just some syntax. For Tidal Wyrm, you don't have to put mana after the symbols of the mana you gain, just the symbols themselves. For Garden Wonderer, specify when you gain the mana. And it seems you changed the names of some of the cards but not their names within their effects, so you may want to look at that.

Overall, this is amazing. It's clear you put a lot of effort into these, and I can't wait to see what else you'll make. Soldier on dude!

[Phase]

Tidal Spirit seems white, maybe make it's ability {t}; Choose one-gain one life or exile Peacekeeper Mage (new name I developed) and gain 5 life.  And make it 0/3.  Like the dino-riders, keep it up!