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[chaoscal]

a lot of the mechanics you are making such as termination and propagation are effects and not mechanics due to the way each ability has to be reworded for each card

[LordStormWinter]

i see that. but still propagation is histerical isnt it. also i like Eclipse

[chaoscal]

I think there all good as effects and i like them I just don't think they should be mechanically worded still great though

[chaoscal]

dragons of the eclipse should say current life total. queen's guard OP and poorly worded the +1/+1 doesn't specify whether its timed or a counter and a 1 mana especially hybrid mana creature with haste and first strike and buffing needs a downside. propagation shouldn't say tokens. very fun card although maybe make it a 3/6 since it has deathtouch and is already insane with propagation. mooncaller mage's ability should be tap, sacrifice mooncaller mage: ability. also DOTE doesnt state what you do with the dragon once you find it. Mcaller Dragon should say you may counter target spell.

[LordStormWinter]

thank you for telling me what needed to be changed, i really do appreciate the second pair of eyes. Still working on reworking these cards and even producing a few more for the set. will build a few more before i present ALL of them in one go.

-LSW

[chaoscal]

sure thing LSW if you ever need any help, advice, support, ideas or the like even if its to check over your cards me and most likely a few members of the forum are always willing to offer any help. P.s you are a great card designer and i hope you continue. p.s.s i am on this site very often eg at least an hour a day mostly more in a side tab so if you need anything in terms of mtg just message me, post or whatever same for anyone who needs a critical eye or an idea guy for card design. great cards hope the new ones will be good.

[LordStormWinter]

Thanks Chaos, I have been busy building new cards will update soon. Nerfed some buffed others and reworded the hell out of em all. But still need that second pair o eyes.

-LSW

[chaoscal]

LSW and anyone else what would you recommend about my new set should i release the cards in one big go like last time or add frequent additions to the set like your doing. 

[LordStormWinter]

I saw add frequent additions that way they keep returning for more goodies.
-LSW

[LordStormWinter]

Plus I'm building an entire Block (2-3 sets) this is just the first set of three for me

[LordStormWinter]

I have seen more 1/1 r/w creatures more OP than QG, Chaos, i added a time of effect to mitigate some of the immense power. THe card that first comes to mind was a 1/1 goblin legionnaire from RTR he had haste, firstrike and Battalion. That made him far too powerful.

 

[chaoscal]

Can't see many changes you need to change queen's guard and have propagation as an effect not a mechanic, probably do the same for termination by the way mana costs go before tap and you dont need to put tap: black mana symbol, green, blue etc on basic lands

[LordStormWinter]

Here is the newest update on the entire set. Note that this is 32/175 still working hard to make it by the end of the month. Chaoscal and Atzegio have been instrumental in id-ing flaws and wording mistakes throughout this process and this is a shoutout to the both of you. Plz dont judge Tyvanum, The Dreaming One to harshly, Read the lore on the 5 elementals and the artifact "Scroll of Durial's Prophecy" before you judge him. Thanks all

-LSW

2014-07-07

[chaoscal]

you STILL haven't changed Queen's guard that card is way too overpowered its unreasonable

[chaoscal]

BTW love tyvanum, break out progenitus and door to nothingness and have rainbow demon powerkill fun times.

[LordStormWinter]

im glad you like him Chaos. But did you read the Elementals (5 mono colored) flavor text carefully and the SoDP flavor text to really understand the force behind Tyvanum?

[chaoscal]

love the flavour behind the prophesy etc and durial and everything like the elementals cannot see a black elemental though either way good job.

[LordStormWinter]

thanks, still more to come tho. u have any ideas as to what you want to see in the set?

[chaoscal]

since you have a destroyer as a primary antagonist of the set you need a main protagonist to work as counterbalance a being of creation to counter tyvanums destructive power and maybe a group associated with tyvanum's rise and a group against it like cults to get the sense the plane is conflicted towards the resurgence of tyvanum

[LordStormWinter]

i agree, was thinking about using the Mooncaller Faction as the protagonists because they r W/U hybrids. And using the Dawn-Mantle  W/B hybrids as the Counterbalance.

Eclipse vs Judgment. Wat do u think?