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Posted 14 May 2013 - 01:45 PM

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Hello, ummm yea this is my first time using this. But I am very experience in YuGiOh card making so i'm starting to do Magic now. Please inform me if you like them or if i made a mistake or if they're too imbalanced, I will have more cards than these two but just tell me how they are, oh and for copyright purposes, these cards are purely from Google Images. Hope you like them c:
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Krieg of Keld
Posted 14 May 2013 - 02:01 PM

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  • Locationon top of Emrakul, dressed in the skin of a Phyrexian obliterator I killed myself.

it's similar to a lot of other morph designs, though it seems very flavorful with assassins. Could be bumped up to an uncommon but aside from that, good job for a first card. Also, if your making a card multicolored, there's an option for a gold frame on the cardmaker.


tumblr_m1sjkv9SrJ1r5zfj8o1_500.gifI may or may not have a slight obsession with Hellsing.  

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Posted 14 May 2013 - 02:05 PM

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Yea i was going for it to be a little similar to cards with Morph, but i did want it to be slightly original ^-^ also i'll be adding more cards, and thanks :3 also i'll definitly be using that gold frame for multicolors.


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Posted 18 August 2013 - 05:37 PM

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Yes, I like those cards, only thing I dislike is the art of Assassin Cemetery. Looks like a normal Graveyard to me xD


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Posted 23 October 2013 - 08:17 PM

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(bump) c:


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Posted 24 October 2013 - 03:14 AM

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I like this theme, but just as you predicted already for yourself, these cards are slightly too expensive. Not directly expensive at that, but the wrong kind of expensive: In Magic, you can always consider too many manasymbols a limitation of the viability of the card. For example players will always prefer a card with {3}{w}{w} over a card with {w}{w}{w}{w}{w}, even if it is weaker, simply because it is nearly impossible to play it outside of a monowhite deck.

Sometimes there are also inconsistencies like "all non-land and non-creature permanents". You can imagine Magic like a programming language: As an actual card your card would just wipe the whole board, because it destroys all non-land permanents and all non-creature permanents afterwards. You may want to change it into "All permanents that are neither lands nor creatures" or "All non-land/non-creature permanents".

I may have also some complaint/question over the land costing mana, but you know what? It doesn't matter. I can't really complain, because these cards are creative. While they are based on AC to some extend, you actually tried to bring original interesting card ideas to this forum and succeeded at it. Everything I can help you with are minor balance changes and the rules of Magic in general. Good work.


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Posted 26 October 2013 - 11:30 AM

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wow! Thank you so much!! that all ways amazing advice :) thank you, i'll make sure to add that to my new works :D


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Posted 13 December 2013 - 03:08 PM

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Nice cards, but Assassinate and Leap Of Faith are actually already cards in real life. You might want to consider changing the names to avoid confusion.


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Posted 16 December 2013 - 01:02 PM

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assasins blade costs way to many mana


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