Hello everyone, its been to long- well life is life...... ANYWAY enough of that, awesome set here, although I see quite a few holes and errors, it is very easy to see what you were going for, and these cards do show great potential in your designing skills. (You should know I am awful at ignoring grammar/syntax errors even when I know what the card is saying.) So, I did see that this set would be very ideal so far for drafting purposes, but the only trouble is how restrictive a lot of these costs are, I would lighten up on the mana, the hybrid mana that is everywhere here does offer flexibility, but lessening on colored mana an adding more colorless mana to a lot of these cards would do them good without becoming to powerful. Although with those lairs that make all lands tap for a color, that offers whole new routes for hybrid mana.
In any case, I can see that you enjoy this, and are quite a good person, so carry on with the good work! If you need examples of where you are going wrong with syntax/grammar, I can provide some, but don't fret over it, we all make mistakes like that. (Although I am a bit of a grammar/syntax freak so I always notice.)
Good luck my friend!