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Just thought it would be interesting to try a land card I haven't seen before...

 

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Might give it some mana adding ability as an alternative as well. With a name like that make it white and/or black. Also if you need art for it just look on DeviantArt or do an image search it shouldn't be terrible hard to find something that fits. 



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I figured black would be Graveyard of Villains or something similar, heroes should be good guys :)

And I'll give it a try, I don't usually add art to my cards but I'll look..


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Cool idea, but there are some decent issues here:

 

Without a mechanical reason for a new subtype of land, I don't see why it needs the graveyard type. The flavor you're going for is fine, but it needs context to make sense. As a single card, or even as a pair, the added type isn't necessary when the names tell you they're graveyards anyway.

 

Secondly, Wizards frowns upon lands that don't produce mana. Players don't like having to spend their land drop on a land that won't let them cast things, even if they have other abilities. So, I'd recommend adding, "T: Add 1 to your mana pool." Or something like that at least.

 

Lastly, the ability needs a wording change. I don't think the 3 power or less rider is needed, and it just adds unnecessary complexity to the card, so I'd suggest something like this: W, T: White creatures you control get +1/+1 until end of turn.



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i agree with kalam mekhar but instead of just colorless mana it should be white mana just a thought







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