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Guys I Am New To Magic The Gathering But I Made A Card. I Need You Guys To Share Your Opinions. Is It Fair? Is It Balanced? Stuff Like That. Oh Yeah, Meet Me On YuGiOh Card Maker. I Am A Perfectionist At That Game. They Have A Lot In Difference. Soon I'm Gonna Make A Darko Phantoma Doragons When 3 Combine. Without Further Ado, I Present To You MTG Fans, DARKO DORAGON! ( Click The Link. )

http://www.mtgcardma...setname=Doragon


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Guys Sorry It Says Something About The Card Error Thing So This May Take Me A While To Fix...


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Yes! I Turned It Into A Link! Thank You For Your Patience!


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First, you don't need reach if you have flying! Second, you use commas not +'s. A 6/4 that you can't bring out until your 5th turn that gains anything based on the cards on the field is a little OP'd in my mind just because you probably have at least 2 other creatures on the field making this an 8/6 at least. I would delete that effect, so I won't point out the errors. His second effect I like. It would be worded as so: "Discard 1 card: Reveal any 3 cards from your library to your opponent. Shuffle your library then put the cards on top of your deck in any order." At least I think that's how. Last line of text: "If possible, discard one card from your hand." I'm contemplating about whether you still need the if possible because I don't think there is a rule stating if you can't discard a card something happens. Finally, if this is a common then I'm a flaming headed water buffalo spirit with giant antlers that goes around the world catching Yugioh monsters in pokeballls with a pet ghost. Make it at least a rare if not a mythic rare.


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Actually It Is A Mythical Rare I Think That Is What They Are Called?

 

Anyways Thanks For Pointing Out The Mistakes.

I Actually Noticed I Don't Need Reach After I Posted It But The Link Was Already Up So I Just Left It.

The Last Effect I Just Thought It Would Be OP Straight Away If I Didn't Do Something About Restriction Or Like Unbalanced. 

The Card Will Stay Like This, But I Shall Change The Effects And Stuff And Create My Darko Phantoma Doragon. The Will Be A Topic On That Soon.

 

Let's Just Hope There'll Be No More Mistakes XD.

 

P.S. Thanks Again.


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Changing Title Name.


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You Don't Need To Capitalize Every Word Either. And you could just post the new card on this forum. Also, right now the card is common. If the symbol was red, then it would be a mythic rare.



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Oh Shush It's My Habit...

You Say The Back Should Be Red?


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Like Where The Black Background Is? Wouldn't That Make It A Fire Card Then?


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That Black X Shows It's 10th Edition Mythical. Rare Shows Golden...


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Damn why'd I even sign up...

I ain't belong here.

Better learn the game...


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It's ok. Didn't mean to offend, and I just meant for the card not to capitalize every word. And if the X is red, then it's a mythic. Black is common. The game is pretty simple. I would suggest watching this 6 video series on how to play 


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At the risk of being rude, you most definitely should learn how to play the game, and probably a bit about templating, before trying to make complex and/or powerful Magic cards. I see so many people on here that say, "Hey, I have no idea how to play but I wanted to make this card, tell me what you think!" and then invariably they get a ton of crap for how terrible of a Magic card it is. Well of course it is - you don't know how to even play! If you want your custom cards to be taken seriously, they really should read and feel like a Magic card, not a Yugioh one. The games, as you say, 'have a lot in difference.' Which is to say they're drastically different and should never be mixed IMO.


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At the risk of being rude, you most definitely should learn how to play the game, and probably a bit about templating, before trying to make complex and/or powerful Magic cards. I see so many people on here that say, "Hey, I have no idea how to play but I wanted to make this card, tell me what you think!" and then invariably they get a ton of crap for how terrible of a Magic card it is. Well of course it is - you don't know how to even play! If you want your custom cards to be taken seriously, they really should read and feel like a Magic card, not a Yugioh one. The games, as you say, 'have a lot in difference.' Which is to say they're drastically different and should never be mixed IMO.

(Sigh) I know...


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It's ok. Didn't mean to offend, and I just meant for the card not to capitalize every word. And if the X is red, then it's a mythic. Black is common. The game is pretty simple. I would suggest watching this 6 video series on how to play 

 

Thanks. I like that!


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oh god, the wording...  :wacko:

 

you're deffinatly a yu-gi-oh card maker. In Magic however, Dragons are more used in red colors. Your card is interesting, but this smells more like Black Demon to me. 


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oh god, the wording...  :wacko:

 

you're deffinatly a yu-gi-oh card maker. In Magic however, Dragons are more used in red colors. Your card is interesting, but this smells more like Black Demon to me. 

 

Huh. Guess That Is Something To Think About...


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I Have This Goblin Deck Not Sure If It Is A Structure Deck But It Is Really Good. I Attempted To Play But Failed A Lot. My Opponent Helped Me And In The End He Admit Defeat! I Was Proud I Won A Game That I Didn't Know Back Then. He Said Didn't Count Which Makes A LOT Of Sense...


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I Have This Goblin Deck Not Sure If It Is A Structure Deck But It Is Really Good. I Attempted To Play But Failed A Lot. My Opponent Helped Me And In The End He Admit Defeat! I Was Proud I Won A Game That I Didn't Know Back Then. He Said Didn't Count Which Makes A LOT Of Sense...

goblins are fun. best red synergy I've played with, right next to elementals. winning or losing is rarely exclusively the players fault in magic though. you only get to play the cards you draw. btw, do you capitalize the first letter of every word on purpose?



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He said it was his habit. Seems tedious and unnecessary to me, but to each their own.

 

@enesyugiohfan: I really don't think you should capitalize everything on the cards you make, however. It makes them hard to read and it's tough to tell keywords apart from the rest of the text.







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