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ok that is good.


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here is my card for this sertar since when we do the competition it can't be our own ideas so may as well do this now. The card itself is made to symbolise that no matter what it will 'bring Tomorrow' in that each players life total is set to 20 and it cant attack plus the fact you get a turn. The card doesn't include red or black because black is selfish and only for itself and red is in the moment so doesn't think of tommorow. Blue for forethought and progress, white for order and green for life and growth all fit into what is needed for continue survival and all have a meaning for 'tomorrow'. hope you like it.

 

 

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Here it is Sertar: http://s1378.photobu...lfe120/library/


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what are your thoughts?


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By god lordstrom this card is just the nighmare of everything XD nice card but a lil too strong and activate eff out of color U dont spawn token  (*at least make it w/u)

 

Chaoscal this one is realy balanced and realy weird/fun BUT some wording isue like instead of non-land cards its non-land permanent and theres a in random betwen and (and) all graveyard\

 

 

I dont know if i was supose to judge to cards and dont give tips or give tip then judge the cards 



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sertar i've edited out the word issues. please judge, tip whatever they're your cards you asked us to make its up to you what you do with them.



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revamped the card with consideration of the Mana cost being only 5


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judge then give tips.


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Sorry chaoscal i just found out another lil issue you should put the exept bringer after the graveyard unless its what you wanted to do (im going outside for like 3-4 hours i wont be able to answer)



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ive done it finally worded correctly.



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so Sertar do you like the corrections ive done to my submission?


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LSW read the brackets



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i c those brackets (yum Brackets)... lol


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i wont ask



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inside joke, sry. when i see brackets i go crazy for em. (burps) also im retasking the card slightly


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there the card should be fixed now


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I like your new version lsw but instead of saying when this card enter the battlefield from hand library or graveyard why dont you just said when this card enter the battlefield?



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ok i c.


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revamped pt2. xD


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Now this is pretty dang good!







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